Post by unlockheart on Mar 7, 2009 16:01:00 GMT -5
Warning: This story contains naked females, torture, fighting and even blood and humour, hints at pairings even a slightly gay one. Do not read on if you can't handle any of these.
Basically the story I was working on for some time now, bringing it here for you guys to read and added a better intro. =D
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Characters:
Main:
Reenii Absoda - Basically a girl who likes to play games and act in them.
Looks: She has purple hair with pink strands in them, a red skirt and jacket along with black shoes and white socks and shirt. She normally has her hair down and she has blue eyes.
Akola Snun - He likes to also play games with his best friends.
Looks: He has short black hair, normally wears his school clothing which is a red jacket, white shirt and black trousers with black shoes. He has blue eyes and has a more manly face and he is pretty strong.
Orun Phantom - Another main character who joins the mad two in playing games.
Looks: He has red hair which reaches his ears, red jacket, red trousers as you can choose between the colour with black shoes and white shirt. His eyes are also blue.
The Guardian - A powerful being who has lived since the beginning of everything, she can merge with others by putting a seal inside them so she knows whenever they are in trouble and can teleport directly there, she also has the skill to train them but prefers not to get normal humans involved.
Looks: She has long brown hair that reaches down her whole back, freckles on her face and arms, her skin looks perfect in every way and she has blue eyes. She normally wears a normal pink and grey jacket with a white shirt under it and pink trainers and trousers but when she goes into battle she wears a different suit, a long white cape, green and white all over her shirt, trainers and trousers. She also carries a sword with her and sometimes a stick staff. She normally secretly carries a necklace around her which contains the seal but looks like a locket.
The Seal - A necklace locket made of silver, inside it contains the seal and four different parts. If you have the full seal you could take over the world and reshape it to your desire. That is why there are guardians around to protect it however most of them had died, leaving one Guardian left.
Apolo Runda - The main bad guy, he is after the seal in order to destroy and rebuild the world into a better one for himself, he can be very selfish and will kill people if they fail him without a second thought or so it seems. He is also very strong and rich.
Of course his real intentions are very unclear as he keeps them to himself.
Looks: Brown hair, normally wears a grey suit and has green eyes.
Supporting:
The Stone - He can use the ground and stones to aid him in battle. Basically looks like a stone monster out of human mode.
The Forester - He can use the forest and plants around him to fight. Basically looks like a normal human but with vines going up his whole body when is out of human mode. He uses a stick to tap and fix the land, including the grounds where plants grow. He is also known as Haka.
The waves - She can use water to aid her in battle. Looks like a normal female when in public but can transform into a wave.
The Skies - She can use the skies as an advantage and change the weather temporarily. Looks like a normal female but takes on the form of natural disasters or the weather.
The Flamer - A warrior monster which needs to be summoned to battle instead of resurrected, the one monster stopping Apolo from controlling the world and getting the seal. The Flamer is usually very stubborn and doesn't work for anyone but for his own purposes.
Sakura Synan - One of Apolo's people, she joined him in aid to retrieve the seal in order to remake the world into a better place. She sees the Guardian and anyone with her an enemy for getting in the way. She has bumped into the Guardian many times but has yet to defeat her.
Looks: Purple hair that reaches her neck, two long strands at the front go down a bit further with blue eyes, she wears a robe with white in the middle and blue on the edges and the rest of her clothing looks like this as well.
Emya Shant - Another of Apolo's people, he joined in order to protect Sakura and help bring about this new world as that is her wish.
Looks: He has White short hair, a robe and clothing like Sakura's but it is black and white this time. He also has blue eyes.
I'll add characters as the story goes on, the cast is also very big. xD
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Intro: The beginning
"Take them away," ordered a man who stood tall, there were five other men in the room that looked like a tidy office a long with some guards who grabbed a hold of the five suited men, doing as the man had ordered them to do, he was clearly in charge.
"In fact I've got the perfect place for them to go," he replied once more "We're going to test the power."
At this the men were piled out and told to be quiet, it was clear on their faces that they knew it would be the end for each of them, it was clear they were terrified amongst other feelings. They went down the corridor until they reached a huge doorway made of some sort of metal, it was opened and they were ordered through. They knew it wouldn't do any good to try and escape so they did as they were each told to do and each went into tightly sealed pods. The pods were blue and had a see through window so they could see what was happening inside.
Once they were inside them, the pods closed and the machine tied down their whole body with straps, two on the wrists, another on the body and the others on the ankles. Last of all a helmet was also put on top of their heads which also covered their eyes and ears.
Once this part was done, the man turned towards a tank also in the room, a young looking girl seemed to be floating in the water with her hands around her tucked in legs, her head resting between her knees. Her hair was of a silver colour and simply floated around. She was also naked and facing towards the man with her eyes closed.
"I think it's about time we got our revenge," the man mumbled. He happened to be wearing one of those business suits of a grey colour, his hair was still pretty brown with a few streaks of grey in them. He was clearly getting old, probably in his forties by now.
"We're ready, sir!" replied one of the few people left in the room after the guards had left back to their post having been dismissed after the men were tightly strapped in.
"Very good, begin right away," he ordered, at that the machine turned itself on, in the tank the girl sat rather still in the same position she was in before except the water seemed to glowed a bit more, on the other side of the room the men started to react in a strange way, almost as if they were screaming but it couldn't come out of them. The man watched them with hate in his eyes as if he was happy to see them suffer right before his eyes.
It was all done, the men had suddenly vanished right before his eyes but the man knew very well where they had gone and he could now care a less about them.
He turned his attention back to the girl in the tank, the water had turned back to normal by now, his green eyes looked right into her closed eyes.
"I think it's time she awoke," he muttered to himself.
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Hope you enjoyed it! Let me know what you think. (:
Basically the story I was working on for some time now, bringing it here for you guys to read and added a better intro. =D
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Characters:
Main:
Reenii Absoda - Basically a girl who likes to play games and act in them.
Looks: She has purple hair with pink strands in them, a red skirt and jacket along with black shoes and white socks and shirt. She normally has her hair down and she has blue eyes.
Akola Snun - He likes to also play games with his best friends.
Looks: He has short black hair, normally wears his school clothing which is a red jacket, white shirt and black trousers with black shoes. He has blue eyes and has a more manly face and he is pretty strong.
Orun Phantom - Another main character who joins the mad two in playing games.
Looks: He has red hair which reaches his ears, red jacket, red trousers as you can choose between the colour with black shoes and white shirt. His eyes are also blue.
The Guardian - A powerful being who has lived since the beginning of everything, she can merge with others by putting a seal inside them so she knows whenever they are in trouble and can teleport directly there, she also has the skill to train them but prefers not to get normal humans involved.
Looks: She has long brown hair that reaches down her whole back, freckles on her face and arms, her skin looks perfect in every way and she has blue eyes. She normally wears a normal pink and grey jacket with a white shirt under it and pink trainers and trousers but when she goes into battle she wears a different suit, a long white cape, green and white all over her shirt, trainers and trousers. She also carries a sword with her and sometimes a stick staff. She normally secretly carries a necklace around her which contains the seal but looks like a locket.
The Seal - A necklace locket made of silver, inside it contains the seal and four different parts. If you have the full seal you could take over the world and reshape it to your desire. That is why there are guardians around to protect it however most of them had died, leaving one Guardian left.
Apolo Runda - The main bad guy, he is after the seal in order to destroy and rebuild the world into a better one for himself, he can be very selfish and will kill people if they fail him without a second thought or so it seems. He is also very strong and rich.
Of course his real intentions are very unclear as he keeps them to himself.
Looks: Brown hair, normally wears a grey suit and has green eyes.
Supporting:
The Stone - He can use the ground and stones to aid him in battle. Basically looks like a stone monster out of human mode.
The Forester - He can use the forest and plants around him to fight. Basically looks like a normal human but with vines going up his whole body when is out of human mode. He uses a stick to tap and fix the land, including the grounds where plants grow. He is also known as Haka.
The waves - She can use water to aid her in battle. Looks like a normal female when in public but can transform into a wave.
The Skies - She can use the skies as an advantage and change the weather temporarily. Looks like a normal female but takes on the form of natural disasters or the weather.
The Flamer - A warrior monster which needs to be summoned to battle instead of resurrected, the one monster stopping Apolo from controlling the world and getting the seal. The Flamer is usually very stubborn and doesn't work for anyone but for his own purposes.
Sakura Synan - One of Apolo's people, she joined him in aid to retrieve the seal in order to remake the world into a better place. She sees the Guardian and anyone with her an enemy for getting in the way. She has bumped into the Guardian many times but has yet to defeat her.
Looks: Purple hair that reaches her neck, two long strands at the front go down a bit further with blue eyes, she wears a robe with white in the middle and blue on the edges and the rest of her clothing looks like this as well.
Emya Shant - Another of Apolo's people, he joined in order to protect Sakura and help bring about this new world as that is her wish.
Looks: He has White short hair, a robe and clothing like Sakura's but it is black and white this time. He also has blue eyes.
I'll add characters as the story goes on, the cast is also very big. xD
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Intro: The beginning
"Take them away," ordered a man who stood tall, there were five other men in the room that looked like a tidy office a long with some guards who grabbed a hold of the five suited men, doing as the man had ordered them to do, he was clearly in charge.
"In fact I've got the perfect place for them to go," he replied once more "We're going to test the power."
At this the men were piled out and told to be quiet, it was clear on their faces that they knew it would be the end for each of them, it was clear they were terrified amongst other feelings. They went down the corridor until they reached a huge doorway made of some sort of metal, it was opened and they were ordered through. They knew it wouldn't do any good to try and escape so they did as they were each told to do and each went into tightly sealed pods. The pods were blue and had a see through window so they could see what was happening inside.
Once they were inside them, the pods closed and the machine tied down their whole body with straps, two on the wrists, another on the body and the others on the ankles. Last of all a helmet was also put on top of their heads which also covered their eyes and ears.
Once this part was done, the man turned towards a tank also in the room, a young looking girl seemed to be floating in the water with her hands around her tucked in legs, her head resting between her knees. Her hair was of a silver colour and simply floated around. She was also naked and facing towards the man with her eyes closed.
"I think it's about time we got our revenge," the man mumbled. He happened to be wearing one of those business suits of a grey colour, his hair was still pretty brown with a few streaks of grey in them. He was clearly getting old, probably in his forties by now.
"We're ready, sir!" replied one of the few people left in the room after the guards had left back to their post having been dismissed after the men were tightly strapped in.
"Very good, begin right away," he ordered, at that the machine turned itself on, in the tank the girl sat rather still in the same position she was in before except the water seemed to glowed a bit more, on the other side of the room the men started to react in a strange way, almost as if they were screaming but it couldn't come out of them. The man watched them with hate in his eyes as if he was happy to see them suffer right before his eyes.
It was all done, the men had suddenly vanished right before his eyes but the man knew very well where they had gone and he could now care a less about them.
He turned his attention back to the girl in the tank, the water had turned back to normal by now, his green eyes looked right into her closed eyes.
"I think it's time she awoke," he muttered to himself.
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Hope you enjoyed it! Let me know what you think. (: